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Dear Queen Chrysalis

If I showed you love, would you open your heart to it?

If I gave you compassion, would you return it in kind?

If I said that your beauty was beyond all else in Equestria, would you believe the words of my lips?

If I said that your voice was the most magnificent sound I've ever heard, would you let it grace my ears?

If I said that I wished to serve you, would you find me a place in your presence?

If I said that I wished to fight for you, would you place me at the front ranks of your mighty legions?

If I truly wished to say and do all of these, would you allow it to be so, my radiant queen…?
I started working on some ideas for a few Queen Chrysalis-themed poems, and this was the first one I managed to get written out. :heart:

Hope you guys like it, and please feel free to offer whatever (polite) comments you may have :)

Also, stay tuned for more of these poems, hopefully.
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:iconmark-terron:
Mark-Terron Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful poetry : )
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
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:iconebeauocean:
ebeauocean Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful my loving subject, thank you for your...contribution.
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you kindly, my queen. Your approval means a great deal to me :love:
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:iconebeauocean:
ebeauocean Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anytime Drew. I look forward to the day when you can visit me in Equestria.
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I await that day as well :3
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:iconebeauocean:
ebeauocean Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You could be of great use to us...
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:iconhtrevor27:
htrevor27 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
Chrysalis>Cadance.
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you agree :D
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:iconhtrevor27:
htrevor27 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
There're some lookers on that show.
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:iconxxqueen-chrysalisxx:
XxQueen-ChrysalisxX Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
yes
yes
yes
yes
yes
yes
and yes.
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My queen! X3
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:iconthedragonlover95:
thedragonlover95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Amazing!
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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:iconthedragonlover95:
thedragonlover95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
anytime hope you make more
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hope to very soon :)
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:iconthedragonlover95:
thedragonlover95 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
yay!
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:icondreamrex:
DreamRex Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your very good a poetry,it was very beautiful , i suck at poetry XD
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:icondreamrex:
DreamRex Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome *bows*:iconbowplz:
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the faves, btw.
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:icondreamrex:
DreamRex Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem pal, your work is great :)
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:iconoctavia-sandwich:
Octavia-Sandwich Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconoctaviaclapplz: This is pretty awesome. Poetry rules! :iconbrohoof1plz::iconbrohoof2plz:
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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:iconoctavia-sandwich:
Octavia-Sandwich Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^
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GodzillaKrueger Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconslowclapplz:

Yeah...that good.
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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:icondraculax01:
DraculaX01 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love it :squee:
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:iconlordpendragonofcaria:
LordPendragonOfCaria Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^
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